Our Moment in Time Writing

Today we wrote about a moment in time, here are some of our fabulous stories.  Apologies in advance about all the references to vomiting!

The fairground ride

I heard people screaming with delight.
I saw a pretty little butterfly flying around.
I felt my heart pumping with delight.
I smelt people eating chips down there.
I wondered if I was going to fall off.

Chloe


The Senses of the Playstation

I heard a big explosion.
I saw red smoke coming from the sky.
I felt the vibrations of the controller shaking my hands.
I wondered if the controller would fly out of my hands.

Travis


The fairground ride

I heard screaming with delight and terror
I saw a bird, it was flying around and it crashed into the ride.
I felt happy and glad that I went on it.
I tasted bugs coming in my mouth, it was disgusting.
I wondered if i would fall off and break my leg.

Connor


The fairground ride

I heard people screaming with terror.
I saw people vomiting and looking very scared.
I felt terror running through my heart.
I smelt steaming smoke coming out of the motor.
I wondered if I should get off or stay on.

Jordyn



The fairground ride

I heard people screaming because they were scared.
I heard the people were terrified.
I heard the wind going round.
I saw people vomiting.
I saw people crying.
I felt the air going past.
I felt my body getting sick.
I wondered if the people didn't like it.

Eloise



My cousin

I heard a bird chirping in the morning.
I saw my cousin when I woke up.
I felt great and I felt way better.
I said to my cousin, "Wake up, let's watch tv".
I wondered if my mum was in bed.

Olivia


Dahla's horse

I heard her go "neigh, brrrrr".
I tasted a Moro bar at the show.
I saw her galloping and then into a trot.
I felt excited but scared at the same time.
I wondered would I fall off.

Maddy


At the big horse show

I heard a horse neighing to talk to another horse.
I saw Kelly running so fast in her paddock.
I tasted a Moro bar.
I felt one of her hooves.
I wondered if I was going to win Champion.

Dahla


The fairground ride

I heard screaming, yelling, birds.
I saw blurry people.
I felt worried, my heart was pumping fast.
I wondered if I should have eaten two blocks of chocolate.

Miles



The fairground ride

I heard lots of screaming in terror.
I heard wind blowing around and around
I saw lots of people with their mouths open, screaming.
I felt my body shaking very hard.
I wondered if it was going to drop me when I was looking down.

Izzy



Spider Bite

I heard my sister saying "Ouch!"
I saw a big lump.
I felt like it was going to happen to me.
I wondered if it was going to get worse.

Kyah



The fairground ride

I heard vomiting, screaming and yelling at the man, "Stop it!".
I saw a tsunami of vomit and water!
I felt fresh air and an earthquake.
I wondered if I should have eaten three whole tacos and pies before I got on.

Fergus



The fairground ride

I heard people screaming in terror and screeching.
I saw people vomiting and looking scared.
I felt terror running into my heart pumping so fast.
I felt wind blowing, it felt good.
I wondered if the world was spinning.

Kendra